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Monday 13 October 2014

My Worst Mistake:


My Worst Mistake

It was just a normal day. I was hanging out with Jacob and his older brother at their house. We were outside playing soccer in their tiny driveway. It was about 7 meters wide and there was a huge wooden fence separating their house from their neighbors house. Jacobs older brother was passing the ball against the fence when suddenly... he punted the ball and it went flying, as it  shattered the neighbours window and bursted into the house. We bolted inside.

As we were running my heart was pounding, as though  it was going to burst out and fall on the ground. We all went inside and slammed the door behind us as we were all in shock. We started looking outside the window and the neighbour came out, but with a soccer ball in her hand, Jacobs soccer ball in her hand and looked furious. We apologised and neighbor said she was angry because her son was close to the window. We all just wanted the day to end. I think that was the worst mistake I ever made.


1 comment:

  1. Awesome paragraph writing Teagan, you really drew your audience into your story. Its good to hear no one got hurt.

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